Rough Plot Ideas

Agreed features:
  1. Ambiguous ending
  2. No dialogue

Plot 1
  1. Girls father in deathbed, she mourns, standing by his side, alongside a doctor/medical person who covers his body with white sheet
  2. Time skip- girl finds loose, leaves her home and go into a clearing in the middle of the woods
  3. She sees something in the corner of her eye
  4. She follows in curiosity
  5. 'Thing' she saw is revealed, now she is chased by said 'thing'
  6. Ambiguous end, is she caught by the 'thing'? Or did she escape?
Plot 2
  1. Girl already in field, holding noose
  2. Flashback to fathers death
  3. Approaches tall tree
  4. Hears something behind her, turns around
  5. She hallucinates 'random' things, may be relevant to her past. She is afraid, yet curious
  6. They become too much for her, she tries to run away
  7. She falls/is stopped by something in her path
  8. End

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Opening Scene
  • start in a field/clearing in woods
  • shots of girl walking
  • diegetic sound - wind, trees walking
  • non-diegetic sound- gloomy, piano, strings (classical)
  • no dialogue, enhance eeriness 
  • girl holding noose - focus on it

Flashback
  • dead father, girl is mourning
  • foot to head of bed?
  • dull filter
  • dimly lit?

Flashforward
  • focus on feet
  • focus on side?
  • focus on face?
  • track girl

Hallucinations
  • 1st - Scarecrow, music stops when focus on it, diegetic, wind blowing
  • 2nd - Hooded cult turn to look at girl, implied someone is killed?
  • 3rd - Campfire, rotisserie babies?

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